Ima Student Posted July 21, 2021 Share Posted July 21, 2021 Hi there, I've finished my essay draft and was wondering if you could give me some feedback? My Essay.docx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gord Barentsen Posted July 21, 2021 Share Posted July 21, 2021 Hi Ima, I've attached your essay with some edits and comments. I'll briefly summarise them here with some suggestions for the next version: Brilliant insight Another brilliant insight Yet another brilliant insight We can discuss these ideas some more in our next session. My Essay-EDITED.docx When a book and a head collide and a hollow sound is heard, must it always have come from the book? -- Lichtenberg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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